If I am not wrong, the only change made to the mindmap is the addition of the references?
The main part of the mindmap is good. Very extensive and well-thought out. However, the references part show insufficient references. You cannot only rely on the VLE materials. You need to get more informaton from - online reviews, articles, forums, youtube interviews - group carrying out actual interviews of past patients, people with vision problems, professional opthalmologists? - Survey to get current data?
When doing a recommendations, it is not enough to just give facts. You must give feedback and response that shows current viewpoints etc. =
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If I am not wrong, the only change made to the mindmap is the addition of the references?
ReplyDeleteThe main part of the mindmap is good. Very extensive and well-thought out. However, the references part show insufficient references. You cannot only rely on the VLE materials. You need to get more informaton from
- online reviews, articles, forums, youtube interviews
- group carrying out actual interviews of past patients, people with vision problems, professional opthalmologists?
- Survey to get current data?
When doing a recommendations, it is not enough to just give facts. You must give feedback and response that shows current viewpoints etc. =
Ms Chua