Overall, information is still insufficient. You definitely need more info to justify your points. Do not just rely on a few websites. Do a survey and conduct interviews (students, teachers, working adults, opthalmologists etc.) to get a better idea of the trend.
Please start on your recommendations report and product. Note that the recommendations report is supposed to be extensive and well justified.
Good! I can see better cross links.
ReplyDeleteOverall, information is still insufficient. You definitely need more info to justify your points. Do not just rely on a few websites. Do a survey and conduct interviews (students, teachers, working adults, opthalmologists etc.) to get a better idea of the trend.
Please start on your recommendations report and product. Note that the recommendations report is supposed to be extensive and well justified.
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